Tian Zhou
4th Period
Honors English II
03/04/2013
First Draft
Seizures have many shapes and forms: absence, grand-mal, myoclonic,
clonic, tonic, atonic, and status epilepticus. (Senelick) Seizures can
occur to anybody at any age and at any time. Whether the individual has
epilepsy does not factor in the odds of having a seizure. Millions of
nerve cells in the brain, called neurons, transmit electrical impulses.
Seizures occur when the neurons misfire. More than one type of seizure
can happen at a time depending on where the electrical disturbance is
occurring in the brain. (“Seizures”)
Seizures
caused by certain visual stimulation is a condition called
photosensitivity. Video games are being targeted for producing this type
of seizure, some more than others. However, flashing lights and visual
patterns like stripes or grids in video games should not be censored.
Photosensitive epilepsy can be spotted early and treated with
antiepileptic drugs. On top of that, video games only make up a small
portion of seizures in photosensitive patients. Other triggers include
natural sunlight, television, venetian blinds, theaters, dance clubs,
rock concerts, and sleep deprivation. (Erba)
There
are many easy methods to avoid having a seizure while playing video
games. Dr. Giuseppe Erba, Professor of Neurology and Pediatrics at the
University of Rochester Medical Center and former member of the Epilepsy
Foundation’s professional advisory board, recommends “watching
television in a well-lit room, reduce the brightness of the screen, keep
as far back from the screen as possible, use small screens. Players
should not play if they are tired, especially if they are sleep
deprived. Avoid excessive use of alcoholic beverages. Take frequent
breaks and look away from the screen every once in a while.” (Erba) One
method Dr. Erba describes as most useful is monocular vision. Players
should cover one eye and look away from the screen if they start feeling
their bodies jerking. Closing both eyes does not safeguard players from
photosensitivity “because the red-tinted light filtering through the
eyelids will be just as provocative, if not more.” (Erba) With so many
ways to easily prevent seizures from occurring while playing video
games, video games should not censor their materials that can be
portrayed as visually stimulating. Photosensitive epilepsy can even be
detected early on in childhood.
Photosensitivity
is rare, about three in one hundred epilepsy patients have it. The
number of patients are about 60% girls and 40% boys. It begins before
the age of twenty, usually between seven and nineteen. (Harding) An
electroencephalogram test, or EEG, “records the electrical signals from
your brain on an EEG machine. During the test, you will be asked to
look at some flashing lights. If doing this changes the electrical
signals in your brain, it may indicate that you have photosensitive
epilepsy.” (Harding) This relates back to why video games are being
targeted as the main cause of seizures in children and teens. They make
up a big portion of the video game industry’s audience and they are more
prone to having seizures because of their age. A simple EEG test can
determine if the player needs to take special precautions when playing
video games. Video games already include a warning about having seizures
in their manual. Therefore, they should not have to censor their
content. (Erba)
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Honestly, this is basically just the premise. You do a very poor job of stating any counterargument what so ever.......... and this has to be less than the page minimal standards. However, your sighting is in check :)
ReplyDeleteI'll write up the conclusion/counter. What do you mean when you say "sighting"?
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